To Aleshia:
Hey Aleshia!
I like your poem a lot. You did a good job with your metaphors, they really do sound like you lol. My favorite line was the one about the cacoon, rough on the outside but beautiful on the inside. It's cute and made me smile. :]
To Katherine:
These are all really good, I'm not sure which one is my favorite. I think I'll have to say it's the last line. "I am Dr. Pepper, with my twenty-seven Different flavors of emotion." I also like the one about the volcano, how it can erupt at any time. I can relate to both of these lol, I like your poem a lot, seems like you put a lot of thought into it :)
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